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The Tree
I gently guide my hands across the course texture of the bark
I smell the gum glue scent and from below, a dog made mark
I hear a weaver bird making it\'s nest amidst the rustling of the leafs
I long to hear the tree\'s voice, as is thought in Indian beliefs

The Rose
Jagged edges on a leaf, while silky smooth the petals are
In between my finger tips, which now bare a thorny scar
The petal slips an glides away, while the scent remains
One side, sweetest smell, the other, pricks and pains

The Grass
Fresh dew sprinkles upon my face as I feel the lushes grass
Blades between my fingers, tickles my feet and tickles my . . .
Rip out a handful to hear the tearing sound
Fresh cut grass and fresh damp ground

The Wind
Natures turn to caress my skin, cool fresh air strokes my face
Standing still arms stretched out, as it changes direction and pace
It brings with it aromas from the places around
It whistles gently, with a soothing sound

My Self
I do not know the colour of my skin
Nor have I ever seen my kin
All these things you take for granted, your mind is free
Yet I enjoy them to the fullest, even though I cannot see...
©2003-2009 ~spyker
:iconspyker:

Author's Comments

Ah, another day, another poem. This one might open your eyes. So to speak

The picture if a work of art from my buddy
Grey Sky

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:icontrillian:
Lovely. Great picture for the poem too.

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:iconchilipalmer:
Wow such a beautiful poem, I love those rhyming couplets ;) (Wink)

Oh and the picture I agree sooooooo suits the poem, great work hombre!!

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:iconselune:
Hey, this is cool! Even though it appears a bit strange visually - the lines are quite long, after all - it has all elements of a good poem. not to speak about the awesome imagery. Simply love it.
My respect,
SFFSnowflake
:iconfishwife:
Oh gee spyker, you've developed so much.. this is without a doubt one of the, if not THE best poem you've submitted so far. I'm not going to bother critiquing it, I'll just bask in the extensive imagery. And you mentioned weaver birds! Yay!! We used to have loads of them and their nests in a thorn tree in the garden.. I miss weaver birds:) (Smile)

Linds.
:iconchamunan:
You've got 5 very good poems here!
The rhyming fits very well and the picture's also very nice!
Beautiful!
:iconvalar:
I love rhyming poems and this one rocks socks!

Good one :) (Smile)

Regards,

Valar.

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They All Sleep. We Just Dream.
:iconobsidiantear:
EEEE! That's all I have to say... EEEEE!

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